Taken from Catholic Insight:
The following analysis identifies a few of the more striking examples of change in the new translation-but there are many more.
The first indication that things are to be different will come early in the Mass with the congregation's response to "The Lord be with you" where they are to say: "And with your spirit"-not "And also with you." The original Latin reads: Et cum spiritu tuo, which is now correctly translated. The original ICEL translators appeared to have major difficulties with "soul" and "spirit," purging mention of these in a number of places, despite what the Latin edition clearly states. These are now restored across the entire Missal.
During the Confiteor, the Latin mea culpa, mea culpa, mea maxima culpa is translated accurately as "through my fault, through my fault, through my most grievous fault" and not just "through my own fault." Worshippers are also reminded to strike their breast as they say these words-a practice that has fallen into general disuse, though it is called for in the present Missal.
In the Gloria, "peace to his people on earth" becomes "peace on earth to people of good will," which is literally what the Latin says, although the inclusive "people" is retained for hominibus, which is literally the generic "men."
"Sin" of the world now becomes "sins" of the world-the Latin peccata being plural. "Sin" suggests a collective guilt or "sinful structures" rather than our personal sinfulness.
The omission in the present translation of numerous expressions in the Latin text that emphasise a Catholic theological understanding has been rectified in the new translation. Examples of these include the phrase onlybegotten Son, of your bounty, deigned, humbly, blessed, almighty, most merciful, glorious, and graciously.
Another significant change occurs in the Nicene Creed, where Credo is translated accurately as "I believe" rather than the present "We believe." In addition, people are reminded to bow at the words "and by the Holy Spirit became incarnate of the Virgin Mary, and was made man." This practice, while called for in the present Missal, is rarely encountered.
It seems taken for granted, even by those who should know better, that most Catholics now find the generic expression "man"-meaning the human race-jarring. Yet one continues to hear in science documentaries about the origins of man.
Fortunately, there are few such "lapses" in the new translation.
The Orate Fratres (Pray my brothers and sisters, or more literally, my brethren) translates meum ac vestrum sacrificium as "my sacrifice and yours" and not "our sacrifice." The latter blurs the role of the priest celebrant and worshippers.
Perhaps the most striking example of the liberties taken by the earlier ICEL translators can be found in Eucharistic Prayer I (the original Roman Canon carried over from the Tridentine Mass). Here, the present English version is almost unrecognisable when set against the Latin edition and the new draft translation, which follows the Latin text closely and restores a much-needed sense of the sacred.
A typical example of the new prose used is: "Most merciful Father, we therefore humbly pray and implore you through Jesus Christ, your Son, our Lord, to accept and bless these gifts, these offerings, these holy and undefiled sacrifices."
In the present Missal, this passage reads as: "We come to you Father, with praise and thanksgiving, through Jesus Christ your Son. Through him we ask you to accept and bless these gifts we offer you in sacrifice." Instead of the priest "asking" God, he will say that we "humbly pray and implore"-a more appropriate approach for mere mortals in the presence of the Almighty.
The pattern continues throughout Eucharistic Prayer I-and to some extent in the other Eucharistic Prayers.
The text now used during the Consecration reads: "Again he gave you thanks and praise, gave the cup to his disciples, and said.." The new translation follows the Latin closely: ".taking also this noble cup into his holy and venerable hands, once more giving him thanks, he blessed it and gave it to his disciples, saying.."
Following the Consecration, the present first Acclamation, "Christ has died, Christ has risen, Christ will come again," becomes in the new translation, "We proclaim your death, O Lord, and profess your resurrection until you come"-which is what the Latin actually says. Later, "Look with favour upon these offerings and accept them as once you accepted the gifts of your servant Abel."-which sounds as if the priest is telling God to do something-is correctly translated as: "Be pleased to look on them with a favourable and kindly face and to accept them, as you were pleased to accept the gifts of your servant Abel.."
At the beginning of Eucharistic Prayer III, the words, "From age to age you gather a people to yourself, so that from east to west a perfect offering may be made to the glory of your name," becomes in the new translation: ".you never cease to gather a people to yourself, so that from the rising of the sun to its setting a pure oblation may be offered to your name"-with geographical space transformed into time.
In the introduction to the Our Father (the only portion provided), the present words "Jesus taught us to call God our Father, and so we have the courage to say" become the more literal: "Taught by commands that bring salvation and formed by the divine instruction, we have the courage to say."
The celebrant's words before Communion are currently: "Lord Jesus Christ, with faith in your love and mercy I eat your body and drink your blood. Let it not bring me condemnation, but health in mind and body." The new version reads: "May receiving your Body and Blood, Lord Jesus Christ, not bring me to judgment and condemnation, but through your love and mercy let it be my protection in mind and body, and a healing remedy."
The priest says in the present Missal: "This is the Lamb of God who takes away the sins of the world. Happy are those who are called to his supper."
The new version is far more striking, with the words "This is" replaced by the stronger (and more accurate) "Behold" (Ecce), and the word "happy" by "blessed" (beati): "Behold the Lamb of God, behold him who takes away the sins of the world. Blessed are they who have been called to the supper of the Lamb."
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